Please tell me what you think everyone!!! You can tell I was a tad bit depressed when I wrote this, but I would like a truthful opinion on it. Oh and just to let you know its a fanfic for dgm....more like a poem but whatever.
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What did you save me for?
"Because we're friends."
But....
"Shh....you're hurt badly."

Those were the last words from him.
Then,
He died.

Blood all over him,
It started to snow.
This cold, white snow,
Washed off his blood.

But,
He wasn't alive.
He's still dead.
"The dead cannot be resurrected."
He told me that.

He died beacuse of me.
Why wasn't I stronger?
I looked into my hands.
They're so...small.

Why weren't they bigger?
Why wasn't I stronger?
I couldn't save him.
even I was covered in blood,
I couldn't save him.
I was the one saved.

I...hated myself for not saving him.
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Hehe try and figure out who's who!

I'm going to guess that the person speaking is Linali, and the person dead is Allen. I'd say a good poem, but I don't exactly think it's a fanfic, unless there's more.

Yeah it's more under the lines of a oneshot or some weirdly formatted poem

Edit: Oh yeah and I forgot to mention, congrats! you got it on your first try

The thing that gave it away was the small hands, and the dead not comming back to life. But I did think about it a good two minutes.

That's sad. But sweet. ;.;

nic poem, but really sad

I'm a sucker for moody depression. T_T
It was very nice.

Awww... It was nice and pretty well written.

And I don't know but I think Fan fic can be anything as long as it's related to the story in some fashion. I think this is a pretty good one ^^

Really bittersweet ! >.<x

Ooh I like it..Although, I think I've heard
the story before. I like the way you put it though!

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